Faulkner essay: Needs shortening.

[Aravis]

I have an essay on William Faulkner's Light in August that needs to be shortened from 4200 words to under 3000 words. In addition, it needs some tightening up and clarification all around. Here's a link:

http://www.geocities.com/violas12/faulkner.htm

Many thanks to anyone who actually reads it.

--Evie

[Xavier]

Do you still need this looked at? Can you email me a Word file of it and I'll annotate my changes...

Yours,
Xavier

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