Symbols and Biblical Truth

[Fuzzyman]

I`ve done two articles I`d love you to look at for me :

The first is on the power of symbols and the sacraments :

http://www.voidspace.org.uk/voidspace/symbols_sacraments.shtml


The second is on biblical truth :

http://www.voidspace.org.uk/voidspace/bible_truth.shtml

It features a passage showing one way of reconciling genisis to modern science.

[Patroclus]

Will you please specify what kind of feedback you are looking for? If you want structural help, and literary criticism, I can provide you with some of that.

If you want theological feedback, I would not be the most qualified. Perhaps you can get Jaltus or GP to help you there.

[Fuzzyman]

Well... as yous ay there are two types of criticism...... criticism of style and content.

I would find *both* helpful. One of the things I`ve been trying to do is simoplify my writing style...... I`ve had a tendencey to use really long and complicated sentences for no reason and I`ve been trying to change. I really did work on the symbols one to make it readable though.

So Patroclonus - any help and feedback you can give me on style would be much appreciated... perhaps feedback from a 'non-theological' point of view would be better - do you understand what I am saying ? (in the article) is it helpful ? could I make it more readable ? and so on..........


Thanks

[Patroclus]

I totally understand. I would not be very good with the theology anyway. I'll take a look when it isn't 2am.