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    This is going more slowly than I wanted, since I have a lot of sources of stress at the moment (increasing responsibility at work, general stress at work, studying for P.E. exam, three kids, home ownership, Trump's totalitarian ways, etc.). But I am making progress.

    Chapters 1 through 4 have been revised; chapter 1 pretty heavily. Chapter 3 needs a good deal of trimming down, but I think it's in a reasonably good place for this run-through. Chapter 5 is where things get tougher: where I introduce multiple secondary characters, etc. But I think I have a path forward now, and I think I'm beginning to solve the problems I created, or discovered, in the first draft.

    I think I know what I'm going to do with the headaches. (that's meaningless if you haven't at least read chapter 1.)

    I also think I've decided on a title for the thing, which accomplishes my objective of a title with a dual meaning. That's gimmicky, but...eh. Gimmicks aren't always a bad thing, right?
    I DENOUNCE DONALD J. TRUMP AND ALL HIS IMMORAL ACTS.

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    Oh, you mean Revision 2. For some reason when I saw the title, I thought you were referring to the Apocalypse.
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    • #3
      Originally posted by Zymologist View Post
      Chapters 1 through 4 have been revised; chapter 1 pretty heavily.
      After checking the thread on the Mandela effect a few times these days, I must say that reading the title and this line made me wonder, 'Have we lost Zym?'
      We are therefore Christ's ambassadors, as though God were making his appeal through us. We implore on Christ's behalf: 'Be reconciled to God!!'
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      • #4
        Originally posted by One Bad Pig View Post
        Oh, you mean Revision 2. For some reason when I saw the title, I thought you were referring to the Apocalypse.


        Nope, this was a purely selfish post about my own writing.
        I DENOUNCE DONALD J. TRUMP AND ALL HIS IMMORAL ACTS.

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