Critique my 'art'

[Christy]

I'm wanting to know if there's anybody here who's an artist that can critique these MSPaints that I did. I want to get better at it; http://fav.me/d4dytrs

[mikewhitney]

the link doesn't show up unless someone quotes your post.

a picture is available at: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...81-d4dytrs.png

[Christy]

Thanks, I don't know why, but it seemed to be messing up on me.

[Christy]

Here's the new picponies_out_on_a_nice_day_by_christy1981-d4pmwsj.png

[LostSheep]

Very nice, Christy!

[fm93]

Wow, that actually looks pretty realistic. I feel like some lines are a bit slanted, though. But on the other hand, my eyesight sucks, so it might just be me.

[Christy]

I feel like some lines are a bit slanted".

It's not your eyesight I didn't use a straight line or path tool on this. I think that may be why this keeps getting turned down from groups for low quality. That's all they say when they decline it

Thanks

Very nice, Christy!

Thanks

[Christy]

I edited it again: ponies_by_christy1981-d4pmwsj.png

[LostSheep]

That's fantastic, Christy!

[Christy]

Thanks

[Christy]

Here's more:fr.png rarity.pngTwilight.pngmlp.pngpony_cherubs_in_mspaint_by_christy1981-d46xa4o.pngwtf.pngtyrion_by_christy1981-d54uvkd.pngfluttershy_snap_neck_by_christy1981-d4d2u8j.pngI had some of them up earlier but deleted them

because I'm being indecisive

[SatanTheAlien]

Of all programs why do you want to use MSpaint? The man you drew looks like a small man, umm can I say migit? If that is the case, then great job, if not then you need to work a bit on proportions.

The lighting looks good on him.

[Cerebrum123]

Except for the eyes I would sat that the Twilight Sparkle one is the best for the MLP stuff(looks like they are facing opposite directions), and the portrait is interesting. I found the crossover of Hearthstone with MLP pretty funny. Pinkie Pie comes in second.

[Christy]

Of all programs why do you want to use MSpaint? The man you drew looks like a small man, umm can I say migit? If that is the case, then great job, if not then you need to work a bit on proportions.

The lighting looks good on him.

Yes, the guy in the pic is a dwarf. I didn't just use MSPaint on all of them, some of them were done on DAMuro and Gimp.

[Christy]

Thanks :)