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    Hey all,

    You may remember that I posted a short story in here a while ago. Well, I've written another, and I think this one is significantly better than the last. Feel free to read the other one, but know that I now consider it in dire need of a rewrite. Which I will do...sometime.

    I'm looking for people willing to read this one and give me some criticism on it. If you fancy reading a story written by some random dude on the internet and telling him how completely awesome it is (or how thoroughly it sucks), then here's your chance! No critiquing experience necessary.

    I don't particularly want to post this one, though. PM me and I'll send it to you.
    I DENOUNCE DONALD J. TRUMP AND ALL HIS IMMORAL ACTS.

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    tldr
    The first to state his case seems right until another comes and cross-examines him.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Cow Poke View Post
      tldr
      I wrote a short story; wanna read?
      I DENOUNCE DONALD J. TRUMP AND ALL HIS IMMORAL ACTS.

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        Originally posted by Zymologist View Post
        I wrote a short story; wanna read?
        Now THAT was CLEVER! Send it to me!
        The first to state his case seems right until another comes and cross-examines him.

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