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    1. #1
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      The Vase that Broke

      The Vase that Broke

      A vase broke one day
      Many years ago
      Shards of broken glass
      Stayed swept out of view
      A thing of beauty
      Painfully undone
      Hidden off in the dark
      Though life went all around
      None that did not see it break
      Knew a broken vase was there
      Its form smashed beneath the carpet
      Though people went by and by
      The vase once beautiful
      Now worn and dirty shards

      One day a cleaner came
      And found the vase that broke
      Out from the rug
      He swept the dust
      Cleared off the dirt from the glass
      And thought it was beautiful
      Although he was a cleaner by trade
      By hobby he made puzzles and art
      He took the glass home to glue and make
      A lovely display of line and light
      The vase that once lost its value
      Now held a beautiful bouquet
      Hope dangles on a string / Like slow spinning redemption / ... / I am captivated / I am Vindicated / I am selfish / I am wrong / I am right / I swear I'm right / I swear I knew it all along / And I am flawed / But I am cleaning up so well / I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself / Vindicated by Dashboard Confessional

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      Re: The Vase that Broke

      Joan,

      I enjoyed this poem. I haven't written a poem in years. Maybe I need to get busy. Thanks for posting your writing.

      rusty
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      Re: The Vase that Broke

      Nice poem, I like the earlier one, "I'm Sorry," as well.

      I used to get the urge to write poetry and fiction every winter when cold weather came on -- short highly structured poems, haiku, and "faux" quotations were my favorite.

      I'm not sure why, but my desire to write dwindled and vanished a few years ago. Perhaps my job of writing software uses up the same parts of my brain as writing words and I need a break. Doing other forms of art seems to let those parts of my brain rest.

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      Thank you so much.
      Hope dangles on a string / Like slow spinning redemption / ... / I am captivated / I am Vindicated / I am selfish / I am wrong / I am right / I swear I'm right / I swear I knew it all along / And I am flawed / But I am cleaning up so well / I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself / Vindicated by Dashboard Confessional

      "The world is so competitive, aggressive, consumive, selfish, and during the time we spend here, we must be all but that." Jose Mourinho

      by day, by night.

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