Range Patrol #6: Intersection of Destinies, Part 2

[JonLanceBarker]

alert the portal of evil!!!!

[jpholding]

It took several hours of trying yesterday (:compsmash1:), but last night I finally got to read the new pages.

Eh? Did you get peanut butter in the CD drive AGAIN???

Thanks for the good word.

Something occurs to me - Shelia and Beamer never really dealt with the aftermath of their very brief relationship. Granted they both know it's futile but still...

I'll do something on this in RP #7 when I introduce Jelica. For now, the events of the crossover story are so close after what happened in RP #5 that they' haven't had time to get to it.

[Teallaura]

[JB]

Eh? Did you get peanut butter in the CD drive AGAIN???

The CD drive on this thing hasn't even functioned in well over a year. (And I can't stand peanut butter.) Good thing I have a laptop too; shame that the wireless Internet connection I get on it is probably illegal somehow, since I don't pay for it, which is why I typically stick to the desktop.

Shows how much YOU know.

Thanks for the good word.

Thanks for the good comic.

[Sinclair]

Not to everyone. Back in the ST #3 thread http://www.theologyweb.com/campus/sh...ad.php?t=78277 we had a speculation that one of them was a clone, and a reader wrote me an email asking if Annabelle had travelled back in time and what in the world was she doing married to Eidolon then. You can never be sure with me, can you?

Indeed, verily, etc.

[Little Shepherd]

I was reading the latest installment, and what Felicity says to Beamer . . . um, does it mean Felicity's in the covenant now? I've read every issue and don't remember that happening.

[Meta Knight]

I was reading the latest installment, and what Felicity says to Beamer . . . um, does it mean Felicity's in the covenant now? I've read every issue and don't remember that happening.

:yeahthat:

[Raphael]

Yeah she is, happened when Brom and Felicity were at Eidolon's place.

http://www.tektoonics.com/shriketoon...etoon4026.html

It was required for Felicity to be completely beyond the power of Gen'a'too. You'll remember that Eidolon said here that they had to either had to expel the seed or she had to accept the protection of the covenant as happend to S'nay.
They expelled the seed, and then to put her completely beyond the power of Gen'a'too she joins the covenant.

[Little Shepherd]

Ok, we see Eidolon taking her aside to tell her about the obligations of covenant . . . says nothing of her actually signing on, though. Unless her intent to do so was voiced on an earlier page.

[Teallaura]

Yeah, I've been looking for that, too. Although I see no reason why he'd be doing that unless she'd accepted I'm kinda wondering when and where she did.

[Teallaura]

Here it is. Could use a little expansion...

http://www.tektoonics.com/shriketoon...etoon4021.html

[Teallaura]

http://www.tektoonics.com/shriketoon...ninsider4.html

Sixth paragraph: 'repercussions' not 'reprecussions'


Twelfth paragraph: deception
Same paragraph, last sentence: need a space after the ellipsis

Fourteenth paragraph: ellipsis again

Actually, you don't seem to have spaced after any of them - several more down below.

[Teallaura]

http://www.tektoonics.com/shriketoon...ninsider4.html

Third panel 'him' not 'hm'.

http://www.tektoonics.com/rangtoon5/rangtoon5040.html

Second panel: preparations

[jpholding]

Fourteenth paragraph: ellipsis again

Actually, you don't seem to have spaced after any of them - several more down below.

I never knew that was the way it was supposed to be. It's all over both sites that way....

[Teallaura]

Yeah, I'd been noticing. An ellipsis should have a space between it and the next word.


Word... word


Otherwise it's connecting the words as if they were one.